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Stargaze chapter 1-Pg 1

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This is my first try at drawing manga strips.Please comment and tell me my mistakes....so that I improve in future.Thanks!!

Screentones: (c) :iconasifalittlezonked:[link]

Stargaze : (c) :icondishna:
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Wow, I think that the background in the first panel looks really nice. But I have a suggestion: choose a gentler font for your word balloons. I don't think that a boldface font like that works well against your art.